Earlier this week i showed photos of the mess of writing an article on spec.
And today i realized that, after intense (for me) work of 6months -
i need to change the focus.
Not shifting back & forth between the two individuals, comparing and contrasting. That format was bothering me, trying to shift smoothly. But start with definitions and describe the people who are my focus examples.
Well, we'll see. The issues of this magazine are filled up to two months before the one i'm aiming at, so i need to get my query in soon.
But first my article must have a clear form. And i've just tossed out the form i've had.